Dear,surly..it's not so precise halfway new..!
Give an honest deep thought to sue..!!
At once, have been... sometime...somewhere... quarantined your-self way...!!
Just recall-n-mindfully say..!!
In dreamy school,...
....when...was punished for simple folly.
At bus stop....,
....when desired bus never came daily.
In long queue....,
.....when all follow the apt discipline.
In big market....,
....when waited for bonanza goods so clean.
In sweet office....,
....when boss wants the quick reports.
At crowded station....,
....when the long train uprightly assorts.
At my home....,
....when distinct turn of work comes.
In lovely garden....,
....when with prettiest beloved ones.
In dark theatre....,
.....when coveted superhero firmly flown.
At petrol pump....,
....when level of fuel is down.
In xerox shop....,
....when print paper is one only.
In absolute prayer....,
....when wish meeting almighty God lonely.
My dear, we surely anyway once just isolated..!
It runs in blood of generations adenined..!
Saving us and Nation, from mere barquentined.!
If..don't feel well-n-stout...get, get simply quarantined...!
-Sunil Pandit
💯👍👍
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully written and very thought provoking!��
ReplyDeleteThanks... Melissa.
ReplyDeleteनमस्कार सर ,
ReplyDeleteअलगीकरणाबद्दल खूप वेगळा विचार तुम्ही मांडला आहे. जो प्रत्येक संवेदनशील व्यक्तीला गंभीरपणे अंतरंगात डोकवायला सांगेल की जर अमुक अमुक ठिकाणी मी अलग राहतो तर समाजाच्या भल्यासाठी अलगीकरण पाळायला हवं. छान रचना. आणि इंग्रजी मधे असल्याने लेखनाचे मोल वाढले आहे.
--- पी.आर. रामदासी.
Thank you very much Sir.
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ReplyDeleteअसे वाचावे.
सर , मी जे टाईप करतोय ते प्रत्यक्षात वेगळंच येतंय.
ReplyDeleteIf don't feel well and stout ....get simply quarantined......
ReplyDeleteMeaningful lime...👌👌👍👍
Yet another heart touching poem.. Beautifully expressed, each line jogs your memory. 👍
ReplyDeleteBeautifully put into poem, the meaning of quarantine in absolute different context.. 👌👌👌 sir...
ReplyDeleteA different dimension....well expressed....
ReplyDeleteNew dimension of your persnality reflected.... very nice sir
ReplyDeleteThanks...just attempted to compose.
DeleteWow, i am really stunned. amazing poem:D Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWelcome Sir.
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem and unique composition, Sir.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sir
DeleteVery nice creation & very well expressed. Congratulations Sir
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Dr Madhavi ji
DeleteThis poem just spoke whatever was in my mind and was unable to express! Amazing. Just amazing Sir! Will eagerly wait for more of these poems!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.
ReplyDeleteSurely.
Out of box thinking and thought provoking poem. Quarantine interpreted in different perspective. Nice one Sir.Thouroughy enjoyed. Pl keep writing. Best wishes.
ReplyDeleteThank you Vice Principal Dr. P. N. Chaudhari Sir..
ReplyDeleteYour edictal comment always gives double boosting standpoint to go beyond the outer box.
Thanks once again.