In morning, I missed to see my cell phone.
And simply stepped in terrace as unknown.
Unfolding the treasure of wonders in cone.
Freshly I find artless scenes outlying liven.
Chirping perky birds venting the true amen.
Gentle breeze nastily caress cheeky sheen.
Sweeping squad make empty roads clean.
Boy throws newspaper upright decently.
Strongman pours life-like milk zealously.
Jaunty joggers jump lively slight in flick.
Citizens do enjoy the onset sprint in click.
Little dainty tea pot's aroma pulls me back.
Corner chair flings open sky as dream jack.
Far divine bells clearly fill joy in eager ears.
Missed phone truely compels cagey cares.
-Sunil Pandit.
या रचनेत एक महत्त्वाचा मुद्दा मला जाणवला की माणूस तंत्रज्ञानाच्या सतत वापरल्या जाणाऱ्या साधनापासून स्वतःची सोडवणूक करुन घेतो तेंव्हा त्याला अवतीभवती चा निसर्ग आणि निसर्गातील अनाघ्रत सौंदर्याचा आनंद मिळतो. छान कल्पना केलीय. आवडली.
ReplyDeleteरामदासी पु. रा.
धन्यवाद सर.आज साध्या गोष्टी सहज अनोळखी झालेल्या भासत आहेत.तोच धागा पकडून चिंतन.
Deleteनिसर्ग सदाबहार आहे. आपण क्षणभंगुर मोहा तोडून जागे झाले पाहिजे. छान!👌👌
ReplyDeleteधन्यवाद मॅडम.क्षणभंगुरतेच्या मोहातच संवाद हरवत चालला आहे.
DeleteLife is naturally beautiful but one has to felt it lively.
ReplyDeleteNature do manifests magic lively.
DeleteThank you very much.
खरंच आपण एवढे गुंतलो आहोत ह्या तंत्रज्ञानामध्ये निसर्गाची उधळांच माहिती नाही राहिली.कविता छान लिहिले आहे. मस्त..,
ReplyDeleteधन्यवाद.
Deleteनिसर्ग नजारा ..आनंदाचा अनुभव.
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ReplyDeleteNo, we have for got salved to the technology. I am not against the technology growth,but should be controlled.
ReplyDeleteYes...it is indeed needed.
DeleteThank you.
Then what we see in mobile, if so many things happening around us.
ReplyDeleteQuestion to myself?
Nature is inviting....we must accept it
DeleteThanks.
Yea could think on one day without mobile...we need a break from cellphone...this poem inspires to do so.
ReplyDeleteYes... Phone-break is must to avoid mechanical routine.
DeleteThanks a lot.
Very true..Contact to the Nature..it means uncountable ,priceless joy.
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