"Mind" is mobile..or
"Mobile" is mind?
We switch on truely.
Fear flows falsely.
God engineered mind...
Man masterminded phone..
None lost anything then?
God, the father of man
Proffered divine gifts...
Unique memory, artful
Thinking & Lucid tongue.
Proud of His best creation.
Child with brash smartness,
Became Father of new science
Unveiled genuine fidelity.
Cost godlike thinking.
Crashed divine memory.
Man discomposed Master.
For the unique mobility..
Overtook all heedlessly.
Turning the wheel of fortune
Conquered the speed of
Everything..,he wished for and
Ran away from happenings.
The mobile mind...
Failed to comfort Him,
And the ray of sigma,
Deleted Lord's image too..?
-Sunil Pandit. Pune
वा सर , कटु वास्तव. इतकी बौद्धिक प्रगती की माणूस मूळच पुसायला निघाला. खूप वैचारिक रचना. छान.
ReplyDelete--- रामदासी.
This is mastermind mobile.
ReplyDeleteमी लिहिलं ते पब्लिश होता होता बदललं गेलं.म्हणून पुन्हा एका वाक्यात प्रतिक्रिया देतोय. खूप वैचारिक रचना सर.
ReplyDelete--- रामदासी.
आजच्या काळाशी सुसंगत!👌👌
ReplyDeleteWonderful theme & poetic structure.
ReplyDeleteछान .... अप्रतिम .....माइंड ....मोबाइल.....
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem on such a subject ..... Comparing mind and mobile.
It's a harsh truth of life.Rightly depicted the mobility of mind.Great.
ReplyDeleteVastav satya
ReplyDeleteVaicharik rachana Sir.Chhan aahe.
ReplyDeleteBrain is totally controlled by phone now a days
ReplyDeleteThe indispensable smartphone... The last line truly said deleted Lord's image too.
ReplyDeleteSo perfectly described current scenario sir... Actually mobile has got more negative impacts on us than the positive
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